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Posted: December 31, 2012In: Public

When a devoted woman suspects infidelity in her husband, her investigations leads her to discover unforgiving facts about him which may force her to take an irrational decision with daring consequences.

Added an answer on December 31, 2012 at 11:12 pm

I think i get the point right. I'll post a rewrite soon. I need to get the idea of of the hook and the conflict into paper. It's just bouncing round my head and i don't have enough words to express them. Thanks

I think i get the point right. I’ll post a rewrite soon. I need to get the idea of of the hook and the conflict into paper. It’s just bouncing round my head and i don’t have enough words to express them. Thanks

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Posted: December 31, 2012In: Public

When an extremely devoted woman learns of her husband's infidelity from a neighbor, she becomes devastated and determines to make confirmations, terminate the marriage and take from him what he cherishes most – their kids.

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Added an answer on December 31, 2012 at 11:06 pm

Thanks for the feedbacks i've received so far, i must confess i'm overwhelmed by it all. I guess the word "terminate the marriage" is a bit confusing as the emphasis i'm trying to make is not on divorce but on the woman ending the marriage in some other way, probably by dumping the husband and hurtiRead more

Thanks for the feedbacks i’ve received so far, i must confess i’m overwhelmed by it all. I guess the word “terminate the marriage” is a bit confusing as the emphasis i’m trying to make is not on divorce but on the woman ending the marriage in some other way, probably by dumping the husband and hurting the children along the line. I think i just need to convey the message with more clarity, but thanks all the same.

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