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A young transgender woman must reconcile with her estranged, conservative, mother in order to carry on her sex reassignment surgery in order to be the woman she was meant to be.
Sex surgery is only part of it.? The main character hopes the mother understands that she is ALREADY a woman (in the wrong body).? She wants her mother to see her as a daughter, regardless. Not that I know - just some thoughts? :)
Sex surgery is only part of it.? The main character hopes the mother understands that she is ALREADY a woman (in the wrong body).? She wants her mother to see her as a daughter, regardless.
Not that I know – just some thoughts? 🙂
See lessAfter surviving an attack from a serial killer Laura Silan is thrown in to a world of secrets and mythology and inadvertently starts a war that she must in turn end while learning the secrets of her own power
I don't know who Laura Silan is, so don't mention her name.? Not until she's the next Harry Potter anyway.? :) I'm getting a lot of unanswered who-what-whys.? ? HOW is she thrown into a world of secrets and mythology? WHO is the war against?? WHAT type of war?? WHY must she learn the secrets of herRead more
I don’t know who Laura Silan is, so don’t mention her name.? Not until she’s the next Harry Potter anyway.? 🙂
I’m getting a lot of unanswered who-what-whys.? ? HOW is she thrown into a world of secrets and mythology? WHO is the war against?? WHAT type of war?? WHY must she learn the secrets of her power?
I guess it might be hard to summarise in a few words, but it needs something, otherwise it’s not clear.? I guess you know the important ones to answer.? e.g. The stakes? And which ones to leave out. e.g. “inadvertently”, because it implies passivity.
See lessAn overworked suburban mother and professional hit women, reaches breaking point as she struggles to juggle the work life balance.
Is a little ambiguous whether this is the same person.? Maybe you could do something like -? "An overworked suburban mother who is a part-time hit woman - - " The close proximity of "struggle" and "juggle" is a bit of a tongue twister. With a common premise like this, it needs something to set it apRead more
Is a little ambiguous whether this is the same person.? Maybe you could do something like -? “An overworked suburban mother who is a part-time hit woman – – ”
The close proximity of “struggle” and “juggle” is a bit of a tongue twister.
With a common premise like this, it needs something to set it apart from the rest.? Maybe by way of stakes. What’s at stake if she isn’t a hit woman?
e.g.?? An overworked suburban mother must become a part-time hit woman when her child is abducted – – “
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