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  1. Posted: August 26, 2015In: Public

    When the most trusting man in America journeys to Nigeria to collect his expected inheritance promised to him in an e-mail by a prince, he must overcome bitter reality and find his prince in order to see the good in people once again.

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    Added an answer on June 21, 2016 at 9:46 am

    Is too big a call to label him the most trusting man in America.? How can to substantiate that?? I guess he is over-trusting.? Or naive or gullible.It seems "journey to Nigeria" and "find his prince" are one in the same, so no need to repeat it.Why is he "his" prince?? Instead of "a" prince.? Does hRead more

    Is too big a call to label him the most trusting man in America.? How can to substantiate that??

    I guess he is over-trusting.? Or naive or gullible.

    It seems “journey to Nigeria” and “find his prince” are one in the same, so no need to repeat it.

    Why is he “his” prince?? Instead of “a” prince.? Does he own him? ? If you are implying that he needs to find a metaphorical prince (to find “good in people”), it’s not clear.

    I wouldn’t mention “email” – it’s too confusing.

    Cheers,
    hope this is useful 🙂

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  2. Posted: June 21, 2016In: Thriller

    When an amnesiac civilian is framed for massacring cops in a drug bust, he runs from bloodthirsty DEA agents to investigate his past and clear his name.

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    Added an answer on June 21, 2016 at 9:34 am

    It's a little confusing -? why does he have to investigate his past?? How would this help clear his name?

    It’s a little confusing -? why does he have to investigate his past?? How would this help clear his name?

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  3. Posted: June 21, 2016In: Drama

    A post apocalyptic space ship carrying the rich and famous is overthrown by the slaves that run it, as they discover their manual skills are the new worlds currency, deeming fame and fortunes irrelevant.

    Wayne Logliner
    Added an answer on June 21, 2016 at 9:31 am

    That's an interesting concept.? Is a little hard to get my head around how manual skills can be a currency. This seems pretty important to the movie, so I hope you have a clear idea about it. Would be good to have focus a slave as the main character.? What are her/his stakes?? What does she/he haveRead more

    That’s an interesting concept.? Is a little hard to get my head around how manual skills can be a currency. This seems pretty important to the movie, so I hope you have a clear idea about it.
    Would be good to have focus a slave as the main character.? What are her/his stakes?? What does she/he have to lose if she doesn’t overthrow the ship?? It would be cool to not be a slave to rich and famous people, but what else?
    Also, I can’t imagine the slaves would “run” it.? I imagine the masters would.? The slaves would work on it.? :]

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