1. Posted: August 12, 2013In:

    An aloof hairdresser battles thousands of enemy troops to reclaim the ex-fiance he still loves, before she gets married on the final day of Germany's biggest LARP.

    wilsondownunder Penpusher

    Hi, Now that I've googled LARP I like the idea. The only thing is, I had to google it. Maybe you could just say "medieval contest or fair"...assuming I googled the right thing. Good luck

    Hi,

    Now that I’ve googled LARP I like the idea. The only thing is, I had to google it. Maybe you could just say “medieval contest or fair”…assuming I googled the right thing.

    Good luck

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  2. Posted: August 12, 2013In:

    fugitive is a story about a man who is famed for a murder he didn't commit on his way to prison his bus crashes so he goes on the run to find the true killer to prove his innocents as police are trying to find his whereabouts

    wilsondownunder Penpusher

    Hi, I take it you have crafted a logline based on the film The Fugitive (Harrison Ford)...if not you may need to adjust your story as its very similar

    Hi,

    I take it you have crafted a logline based on the film The Fugitive (Harrison Ford)…if not you may need to adjust your story as its very similar

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  3. Posted: August 11, 2013In:

    When the world’s greatest loglining guru finds 37 resources to write the best logline, he must exercise humility and post a link on his treasured web site.

    wilsondownunder Penpusher

    thanks :)

    thanks 🙂

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