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  1. Posted: August 9, 2013In: Public

    An aspiring video games actor must save the life of a young actress with whom he is smitten when her jealous producer husband attempts to kill her within a game in order to claim her life insurance policy.

    wilsondownunder Penpusher
    Added an answer on August 9, 2013 at 9:41 pm

    Hi, not sure if it's just me but the way this reads it sounds like a woman is being set up to die in a video game, rather than in real life. Maybe it's just the wording. Call me crazy but I don't thinking insurance agencies pay out on virtual deaths :) Maybe word it differently, assuming the intentRead more

    Hi, not sure if it’s just me but the way this reads it sounds like a woman is being set up to die in a video game, rather than in real life. Maybe it’s just the wording. Call me crazy but I don’t thinking insurance agencies pay out on virtual deaths 🙂 Maybe word it differently, assuming the intent is she dies for real.

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  2. Posted: August 8, 2013In: Public

    A lowly bartender planning her upcoming marriage has her Celebrity Free Pass, the one famous person she can sleep with without any consequences from her partner, walk into her bar, creating a world of problems for herself when she accepts his advances.

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    Added an answer on August 8, 2013 at 10:14 pm

    Hi, I think just saying Celebrity Free Pass still doesn't define it, unless the reader already knows what it is it may still not be clear. Hmmm, it's a tricky one. When a bartender meets the one celebrity her fianc? has given her permission to sleep with, she secretly accepts his advances, causing hRead more

    Hi,

    I think just saying Celebrity Free Pass still doesn’t define it, unless the reader already knows what it is it may still not be clear.

    Hmmm, it’s a tricky one.

    When a bartender meets the one celebrity her fianc? has given her permission to sleep with, she secretly accepts his advances, causing her life to spiral out of control.

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  3. Posted: August 7, 2013In: Public

    After his mother suicided cause got swindled off all of the money,the main character must destroy the deceptive company by using all the knowledge he learned from Uni.

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    Added an answer on August 8, 2013 at 9:14 pm

    Following his mothers suicide, a computer science genius works to bring down a corporation when he learns they swindled his mother of her life savings.

    Following his mothers suicide, a computer science genius works to bring down a corporation when he learns they swindled his mother of her life savings.

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