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  1. Posted: August 2, 2013In: Public

    An ailing country town convinces Kevin Costner to sing at the close of their rodeo. When an accident happens, Kevin thinks he is the 'Bodyguard'. Policeman WIlliam William an Indigenous man, worn down, angry and hungry for a transfer has to 'watch him' and find a cure before the end of the day. (PS would use a lookalike Kevin Costner)

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    Added an answer on August 2, 2013 at 3:36 pm

    Is this a short film?

    Is this a short film?

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  2. Posted: July 31, 2013In: Public

    A mentally challenged teen who is imprisoned because he accidentally murdered somebody falls in love with his therapist against her better judgment

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    Added an answer on August 1, 2013 at 8:15 pm

    Hi, this is better. Can you tell me what the main characters condition is. I'm still confused as to whether he's developmentally delayed or chemically imbalanced. Depending on which it is, that's two very different films.

    Hi, this is better. Can you tell me what the main characters condition is. I’m still confused as to whether he’s developmentally delayed or chemically imbalanced. Depending on which it is, that’s two very different films.

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  3. Posted: July 31, 2013In: Public

    A mentally challenged teen who is imprisoned because he accidentally murdered somebody falls in love with his therapist against her better judgment

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    Added an answer on August 1, 2013 at 9:02 am

    Hi, I agree with DPG. The way your logline reads it sounds like its about a boy who is mentally challenged, which I take to mean slow, for want of a better word. I'm guessing you mean that he's actually mentally disturbed, hence why he is in a facility. Perhaps it would be clearer if you stated whatRead more

    Hi,

    I agree with DPG. The way your logline reads it sounds like its about a boy who is mentally challenged, which I take to mean slow, for want of a better word. I’m guessing you mean that he’s actually mentally disturbed, hence why he is in a facility.

    Perhaps it would be clearer if you stated what he suffers from to enable the reader to distinguish and visualize your film.

    The idea around the therapist is a good one. The director of the hospital would be just as concerned of that as his daughter. Or you could make her a young/fresh/naive therapist.

    Good luck

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