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  1. Posted: August 6, 2013In: Public

    A lugubrious rock star finds himself stuck in his own purgatory.

    wilsondownunder Penpusher
    Added an answer on August 6, 2013 at 8:51 am

    A depressed rock star at the pinnacle of his career battles over whether to continue living an empty life of fame or disappearing back into anonymity

    A depressed rock star at the pinnacle of his career battles over whether to continue living an empty life of fame or disappearing back into anonymity

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  2. Posted: August 5, 2013In: Public

    When a single father to a teenage daughter learns that he has a fatal brain tumor, he takes her on a road trip to find the mother who abandoned her years before and to try to teach her everything she might need over the rest of her life.

    wilsondownunder Penpusher
    Added an answer on August 6, 2013 at 12:04 am

    It might be better if the Dad knows he has a tumor but doesn't tell her before forcing her to go on a road trip. Perhaps he's been absent in the past or maybe he caused his marriage to break down, destroying the family, and now knowing he's dying wants to make up for lost time before it's too late.Read more

    It might be better if the Dad knows he has a tumor but doesn’t tell her before forcing her to go on a road trip. Perhaps he’s been absent in the past or maybe he caused his marriage to break down, destroying the family, and now knowing he’s dying wants to make up for lost time before it’s too late.

    It will give you the road trip, the father daughter bonding and provide rising tension. Just a thought.

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  3. Posted: August 4, 2013In: Public

    A kid named John goes to an amusement park which has a laser tag booth for his birthday with his friends enter laser tag when they find out if they don’t win they get executed

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    Added an answer on August 4, 2013 at 10:16 am

    Hi, interesting idea. Is this a comedy or a horror/thriller? I think the logline could be refined. After entering a laser tag tournament a college student and his friends realize its actually a sick game of life or death with the losing team being punished by death. Needs work but you get the idea

    Hi, interesting idea. Is this a comedy or a horror/thriller?

    I think the logline could be refined.

    After entering a laser tag tournament a college student and his friends realize its actually a sick game of life or death with the losing team being punished by death.

    Needs work but you get the idea

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