1. Posted: July 17, 2013In:

    A corporate executive is forced to choose between taking his dream job overseas with his new girlfriend or staying to try and repair his relationship with his estranged brooding teenage daughter when she announce she’s pregnant.

    wilsondownunder Penpusher

    That's the plan. He tries and fails to the point of giving up...but of course follows through to the end in true hero style

    That’s the plan. He tries and fails to the point of giving up…but of course follows through to the end in true hero style

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  2. Posted: July 17, 2013In:

    A corporate executive is forced to choose between taking his dream job overseas with his new girlfriend or staying to try and repair his relationship with his estranged brooding teenage daughter when she announce she’s pregnant.

    wilsondownunder Penpusher

    Thanks - your rework reads much better

    Thanks – your rework reads much better

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  3. Posted: July 18, 2013In:

    After moving into a new apartment, a famous writer sets up various cameras to spy on his strange neighbour.

    wilsondownunder Penpusher

    This idea is similar to Rear Window/Disturbia. Keen to know what differentiates your story. It might be worth including in the logline.

    This idea is similar to Rear Window/Disturbia. Keen to know what differentiates your story. It might be worth including in the logline.

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