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  1. Posted: July 8, 2013In: Public

    A wrongly convicted inmate volunteers for a hibernation experiment in exchange for one day of parole every five years, which he uses to prove his innocence and search for his missing daughter across an increasingly futuristic landscape.

    wilsondownunder Penpusher
    Added an answer on July 12, 2013 at 7:27 pm

    Hi, Perhaps if you had him due to be executed in 12 months time and allowed 4 days of parole in total this could work - give him a deadline. Each time could result in a new variation on a familiar world - tension could evolve from his continued frustration in never being able to pick up where he lefRead more

    Hi,

    Perhaps if you had him due to be executed in 12 months time and allowed 4 days of parole in total this could work – give him a deadline. Each time could result in a new variation on a familiar world – tension could evolve from his continued frustration in never being able to pick up where he left off.

    It would need to be clear that the daughter is the key to his innocence.

    Maybe instead of hibernation he could be the test subject in a time travel experiment – this way you could have an ever changing landscape without the need for such long stints between parole days.

    Just a thought.

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  2. Posted: July 11, 2013In: Public

    After publicly exposing his super-human abilities, an angel-hybrid teenager is hunted by his demonic half-brother who seeks to increase his power and enslave mankind.

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    Added an answer on July 12, 2013 at 7:22 pm

    Perhaps if they weren't brothers it would be more plausible - maybe they are from parallel worlds who are competing for dominance - at some kind of war. Maybe alien types (in human form) who fall to Earth and battle it out - fish out of water. I'm sensing this would be an action film of sorts. GoodRead more

    Perhaps if they weren’t brothers it would be more plausible – maybe they are from parallel worlds who are competing for dominance – at some kind of war. Maybe alien types (in human form) who fall to Earth and battle it out – fish out of water. I’m sensing this would be an action film of sorts.

    Good Luck

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  3. Posted: July 11, 2013In: Public

    Three half-siblings meet each other for the first time after their absent (and now dead) father left them millions of dollars, with one big catch.

    wilsondownunder Penpusher
    Added an answer on July 12, 2013 at 7:19 pm

    Maybe in order to get it they have to give it away - catch 22 - but they could change lives in the process and maybe change themselves. You could also put a comedy spin on it if all of the siblings were con artists looking to rob each other blind through fake charities etc...I sense you already haveRead more

    Maybe in order to get it they have to give it away – catch 22 – but they could change lives in the process and maybe change themselves. You could also put a comedy spin on it if all of the siblings were con artists looking to rob each other blind through fake charities etc…I sense you already have the plot though, maybe you just need to work on the log line as suggested above.

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