1. Posted: July 15, 2013In:

    A former boxer's last fight forced him to retire (due to brain injury). His estranged wife finds out she is pregnant by him and their unborn child needs surgery. Now he must return to the world of fighting (underground fight circuit run by a gang) – at great personal risk – to not only win the money to save their child, but to also win back the one he lost.

    wilsondownunder Penpusher

    Hi, this could be condensed down a bit: A former underground boxer suffering from a trauma induced brain injury is forced to partake in one last lucrative fight in order to pay for lifesaving surgery for his unborn child. good luck

    Hi, this could be condensed down a bit:

    A former underground boxer suffering from a trauma induced brain injury is forced to partake in one last lucrative fight in order to pay for lifesaving surgery for his unborn child.

    good luck

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  2. Posted: July 8, 2013In:

    A wrongly convicted inmate volunteers for a hibernation experiment in exchange for one day of parole every five years, which he uses to prove his innocence and search for his missing daughter across an increasingly futuristic landscape.

    wilsondownunder Penpusher

    One more thought - to add to the action - someone would need to act as his opponent when he returns to the world each time. Maybe at some intervals he could return to the past, before he was arrested, with his opponent being the law, a man hunt running from what is his ultimate fate. I take it on eaRead more

    One more thought – to add to the action – someone would need to act as his opponent when he returns to the world each time. Maybe at some intervals he could return to the past, before he was arrested, with his opponent being the law, a man hunt running from what is his ultimate fate.

    I take it on each day of parole he learns a new clue as to his daughters whereabouts.

    I like this idea.

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  3. Posted: July 6, 2013In:

    In the near future, a manipulative drug addict is deceived into a subconscious form of intervention–by the people who care about him the most.

    wilsondownunder Penpusher

    Perhaps in your log line point to the antagonist - do one of his 'loved ones' have an ulterior motive? Why else wouldn't your hero want help from his current lifestyle (or lack of)

    Perhaps in your log line point to the antagonist – do one of his ‘loved ones’ have an ulterior motive? Why else wouldn’t your hero want help from his current lifestyle (or lack of)

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