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Composer Karol Rathaus escaped the horrors of Holocaust. Why then his son claims that Hitler killed composer Karol Rathaus?
What you have here is the tagline for a movie poster. (I saw the web site. Very nice.) A tagline is not a logine. A tagline belongs on the film poster as part of the marketing effort. A logline entices someone to read the script. Two concepts for two purposes, each with their own structural requiremRead more
What you have here is the tagline for a movie poster. (I saw the web site. Very nice.) A tagline is not a logine. A tagline belongs on the film poster as part of the marketing effort. A logline entices someone to read the script. Two concepts for two purposes, each with their own structural requirements. See the links at the top of the page to learn about the structure of loglines.
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I like the premise, and I can imagine (or at least I think I can) where the story is headed. Now you need to condense the logline down to its essentials. Try to get it under 40 words.? Something like:When a hapless financier is haunted by the ghost of a little girl while working the deal of a lifetiRead more
I like the premise, and I can imagine (or at least I think I can) where the story is headed. Now you need to condense the logline down to its essentials. Try to get it under 40 words.? Something like:
When a hapless financier is haunted by the ghost of a little girl while working the deal of a lifetime, a beguiling spiritualist tells him he must first help the child return home. (33 words)
See lessTo save their planet, a couple of aliens have come to earth in order to find the resources that help them develop their super powers.
You have told us what the aliens want, but not what stands in their way. If they are advanced enough to reach Earth, what is to stop them from taking the resources they want and leaving again? It would also strengthen your logline if a concrete inciting incident kicked off the quest. In other words,Read more
You have told us what the aliens want, but not what stands in their way. If they are advanced enough to reach Earth, what is to stop them from taking the resources they want and leaving again?
It would also strengthen your logline if a concrete inciting incident kicked off the quest. In other words, why do they need to save their planet now?
Check out the Formula and Generator links at the top of the page for more hints on how to reformulate your logline for maximum impact.
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