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  1. Posted: September 12, 2019In: Action

    An assassin with a split personality is hired to protect a client who, unknowingly, his other personality has been hired to kill.

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    Added an answer on September 12, 2019 at 8:42 pm

    Nice. That's a great logline and a great premise for a story.  

    Nice. That’s a great logline and a great premise for a story.

     

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  2. Posted: September 11, 2019In: Romance

    “When a die-hard Alfa-male falls for a vegan, he teams with his childhood best friend who lives an alternative lifestyle in order to learn how to be a beta and win the heart of his love” Possible title: My Fair Soy Boy

    yqwertz Mentor
    Added an answer on September 11, 2019 at 6:34 pm

    Are you a pilot? "Alfa" is used as the pronunciation key for "A" in international call signs, but ethologist use the common spelling, "Alpha" when talking about social rankings. Anyway, nice premise. I like the second title choice as it goes better with the logline.

    Are you a pilot? “Alfa” is used as the pronunciation key for “A” in international call signs, but ethologist use the common spelling, “Alpha” when talking about social rankings.

    Anyway, nice premise. I like the second title choice as it goes better with the logline.

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  3. Posted: September 11, 2019In: Romance

    A troubled playboy falls for his nubile fiancee?s soon-to-be stepmother, a woman who wants nothing to do with him.

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    Added an answer on September 11, 2019 at 5:31 pm

    If the "soon-to-be stepmother" has rejected the playboy, what is his new goal? Does he marry the nubile fiance to be near her step-mother? (A reverse Lolita story.) Or does he try to win the stepmother over before the wedding? Or does he call off the wedding to pursue the stepmother? Or does he forgRead more

    If the “soon-to-be stepmother” has rejected the playboy, what is his new goal? Does he marry the nubile fiance to be near her step-mother? (A reverse Lolita story.) Or does he try to win the stepmother over before the wedding? Or does he call off the wedding to pursue the stepmother? Or does he forget the stepmother and accept the woman who loves him?

    Maybe this helps to think about it:

    After falling for his nubile fiancee’s soon-to-be stepmother – a woman who wants nothing to do with him – a trouble playboy must [do something].

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