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  1. Posted: August 31, 2019In: Drama

    When her mother dies, a shy, 13-year-old girl loses her faith in God and contemplates suicide when the grief overwhelms her.

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    Added an answer on August 31, 2019 at 9:01 pm

    Assuming her mother dies at the end of Act I, something more must happen, you cannot leave her contemplating for the remainder of the film. What else is going on in the story? What event or person prevents her from suicide? (Don't even think about letting the girl go through with it.)

    Assuming her mother dies at the end of Act I, something more must happen, you cannot leave her contemplating for the remainder of the film. What else is going on in the story? What event or person prevents her from suicide? (Don’t even think about letting the girl go through with it.)

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  2. Posted: August 31, 2019In: SciFi

    An alchemist loses faith in humanity and roams Earth while she breaks her people’s code, manipulating the atoms of sentient beings to interact with friends, torment others, and fight an evil of her own design.

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    Added an answer on August 31, 2019 at 8:44 pm

    What is the inciting incident that causes the alchemist to lose faith in humanity? If the evil is her own design, why must she fight against it? Does she decide for some reason to save humanity from an evil she created? Check out the Formula and the Generator? links at the top of the page to see whaRead more

    What is the inciting incident that causes the alchemist to lose faith in humanity? If the evil is her own design, why must she fight against it? Does she decide for some reason to save humanity from an evil she created?

    Check out the Formula and the Generator? links at the top of the page to see what information should be in a logline.

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  3. Posted: August 29, 2019In: Drama

    In 24 hours she is forced into increasingly degrading and dangerous situations to save her loser boyfriend from a situation of his making only to realise she is better off with a broken heart than with a loser she loves.

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    Added an answer on August 30, 2019 at 3:42 pm

    ?are you better to have a broken heart and live alone than be in a bad relationship? A sure cure for a broken heart is to realize that you were in a bad relationship. People are left with broken hearts when they retain the illusion that the relationship was good and could have worked. Once the womanRead more

    ?are you better to have a broken heart and live alone than be in a bad relationship?

    A sure cure for a broken heart is to realize that you were in a bad relationship. People are left with broken hearts when they retain the illusion that the relationship was good and could have worked. Once the woman realizes the relationship is bad and would never have worked, her heart will start to heal and she can look for someone else, someone with whom she can build a life together.

    In other words, I don’t think the question is valid. Maybe the question you are looking for is: At what point do you end a bad relationship and move on?

     

     

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