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When Raju accidentaly falls into an abandoned deep tube well, chaos ensues as all efforts to rescue him seem to fail and the only thing he has to hold on to is hope.
When you say "Raju", I am not sure whether you mean a man or a little boy. In your previous logline you said "little boy" and it would be better to retain that phrase than using the boy's name. The bigger problem, however, is that if the boy is stuck in a tube well and cannot free himself, then he iRead more
When you say “Raju”, I am not sure whether you mean a man or a little boy. In your previous logline you said “little boy” and it would be better to retain that phrase than using the boy’s name.
The bigger problem, however, is that if the boy is stuck in a tube well and cannot free himself, then he is probably not the main character.? The main character is the person who rescues the boy, whether that be by individual effort or by organizing the rescue effort. The logline should be written from the point of view of the main character.
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I am not getting the sense that your MC faces a big challenge. As I see it, he buys a sailboat and sails over the ocean, where at random intervals he stops for provisions and asks the way. While I am sure there is more to your story than that, it is not coming across.
I am not getting the sense that your MC faces a big challenge. As I see it, he buys a sailboat and sails over the ocean, where at random intervals he stops for provisions and asks the way. While I am sure there is more to your story than that, it is not coming across.
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Like? Richiev, not only am I not sure who the main characters is, I am not sure what their relationship is to “Frankenstein”. The daughter of Mary Shelly, the author of Frankenstein, died in early childhood. And the wife of the fictional Victor Frankenstein died on her wedding night, so no daughter. What other mother-daughter pair is related to the Frankenstein story?
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