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A headstrong girl wants to change her sex to claim her inheritance. But the psychiatrist at the ? sex-change clinic claims her heart.
You want to write a script with an LGBTQ theme, but you refer to people from the transgender community using the slur "trannies"? Are you sure this is the right theme for you? Whatever you write about, treat your subject with respect.
You want to write a script with an LGBTQ theme, but you refer to people from the transgender community using the slur “trannies”? Are you sure this is the right theme for you?
Whatever you write about, treat your subject with respect.
See lessAn emotionally-detached Forest Ranger rescues a traumatized boy from an abandoned logging site and must fight for survival against prehistoric creatures that were awakened during deforestation.
The gist of the story is clear. I wonder though why an "emotionally-detached" forest ranger would risk anything to save a traumatized boy he does not know? What wakes his father instincts? You might strengthen the logline by making the boy the ranger's nephew rather than a stranger.Also, why is theRead more
The gist of the story is clear. I wonder though why an “emotionally-detached” forest ranger would risk anything to save a traumatized boy he does not know? What wakes his father instincts? You might strengthen the logline by making the boy the ranger’s nephew rather than a stranger.
Also, why is the boy at a logging site? Logging sites are places where men work. Would a camp site do as well?
E.g.,
When a ranger comes across a ravaged camp site and find his young nephew is the only survivor, he must save them both from prehistoric creatures awakened by nearby loggers.
Just some food for thought…
See lessAfter discovering her utopian town is the result of a government experiment, a tenacious teenage girl must reverse the symbiosis before it becomes permanent, or risk a fate worse than repressive governmental overreach: being just like everyone else.
As the others have pointed out, this is a good idea, but the wording is a bit obtuse, and by that I mean not just the word "symbiosis", but also "repressive government overreach" and "just like everyone else". What experiment is the government conducting and how does it keep the people from leaving?Read more
As the others have pointed out, this is a good idea, but the wording is a bit obtuse, and by that I mean not just the word “symbiosis”, but also “repressive government overreach” and “just like everyone else”.
What experiment is the government conducting and how does it keep the people from leaving? Or is it just the girl who is being deceived and not the entire town?
One of the teenagers in “American Beauty” is afraid of being like everyone else, but her chosen path to escape the fate of the common man turns out to be a dead end. What is so ominous about being just like everyone else?
You placed the logline under “Comedy”, but I don’t see the comedic elements.
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