A New York-based, coke-addicted DJ who is obsessed with 70s disco sees a mob execution so FBI Witness Protection sticks him in a rural Iowa town.

by seanamulvihill · Penpusher · 240 pts 1,129 views

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dogger · Singularity · 87,055 pts ★ Accepted

The logline sets up a situation for a possibly interesting plot, but I think the plot needs to be fleshed out.. ?What specifically becomes his dramatic problem, hence, his objective goal, as a result of hiding in a small Iowa town? ?(And is he placed in Iowa before or after snitching? ?This needs clarification as it makes a big difference in the how the plot? might unfold.)

seanamulvihill · Penpusher · 240 pts

Thank you. ?It is before he has had a chance to testify.

A small-time club DJ who is obsessed with 70s disco sees a mob execution, so FBI Witness Protection sticks him in a rural Iowa town while he waits for his chance to testify. ?When he helps a young country songwriter create a smash hit song, the fame could become deadly for them both...

Former member · Singularity · 114,968 pts

The logline sets up a situation for a possibly interesting plot, but I think the plot needs to be fleshed out.. ?What specifically becomes his dramatic problem, hence, his objective goal, as a result of hiding in a small Iowa town? ?(And is he placed in Iowa before or after snitching? ?This needs clarification as it makes a big difference in the how the plot? might unfold.)