When an underachieving gravedigger’s cemetery is taken over by his ex-girlfriend’s Mafioso father, he must rise to the occasion to regain control or end up losing more than just his job.

Just because he's a gravedigger doesn't mean he's the owner, in control of the cemetery.? Most gravediggers are just employees.

And in this version, the chain of ?cause-and-effect between the ex-girlfriend and the jeopardy to the you man's life has been broken.? Why does being an ex-boyfriend of a girl who father is a mob man put the young man's life in danger?

The stakes are clear -- his life is at stake -- but "regain control" is vague as an objective goal?? What is his?objective goal --- what must he specifically do ?to save his life?

Just because he's a gravedigger doesn't mean he's the owner, in control of the cemetery.? Most gravediggers are just employees.

And in this version, the chain of ?cause-and-effect between the ex-girlfriend and the jeopardy to the you man's life has been broken.? Why does being an ex-boyfriend of a girl who father is a mob man put the young man's life in danger?

The stakes are clear -- his life is at stake -- but "regain control" is vague as an objective goal?? What is his?objective goal --- what must he specifically do ?to save his life?

Plus to regain control, implies he once had control. Control of what? The cemetery?

Needs to be more specific. Well done.