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CnotePenpusher
Posted: April 27, 20162016-04-27T08:14:31+10:00 2016-04-27T08:14:31+10:00In: Comedy

A drunken priest joins forces with a theater director to create a new religion, pushing his successful Church Of Bingo into battle with all denominations for disciples.

A drunken priest joins forces with a theater director to create a new religion, pushing his successful Church Of Bingo into battle with all denominations for disciples.
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    1. Dkpough1 Uberwriter
      2016-04-27T12:13:38+10:00Added an answer on April 27, 2016 at 12:13 pm

      What makes these two decide to create a new religion? What is the inciting incident? What stakes do they have, what do they gain by creating this religion and what would they lose if it fails?

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    2. Neer Shelter Singularity
      2016-04-27T14:28:39+10:00Added an answer on April 27, 2016 at 2:28 pm

      Agreed with Dkpough1, the stakes are not clear.

      Further more, is the priest drunk just on the day they decide to set up a new religion or all the time? And why a theatre director? What would come of these two collaborating that would make them interesting?

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    3. dpg Singularity
      2016-04-27T21:24:26+10:00Added an answer on April 27, 2016 at 9:24 pm

      Because it’s a comedy, ?I am more willing to suspend disbelief on how the story is set up.

      My primary question is: ?so what? ?What’s at stake? ?What is the story trying to show, to say about religion that ?would make it worthwhile for me to invest some of my precious time and limited money in watching this movie? What’s the dramatic point? ?What theme are you ?trying explore that I might find amusing, if not enlightening?

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