In a drought plagued future, a world weary scientist discovers water, unleashing an ancient evil that threatens the lives of her small community

As the others have said. ? The logline sets up a situation, but not a plot. ?What is the ancient evil and what is the threat it poses -- the ultimate stakes for the community? ?And what is the objective goal that arises from the threat it poses? ?What must the scientist do about what he has unwittingly unleashed?

As the others have said. ? The logline sets up a situation, but not a plot. ?What is the ancient evil and what is the threat it poses -- the ultimate stakes for the community? ?And what is the objective goal that arises from the threat it poses? ?What must the scientist do about what he has unwittingly unleashed?

Agreed with the above comments, the lack of detail make the plot hard to picture.

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