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A brilliant young woman-of-science disguises herself as a (male) witch-finder’s assistant so she can undermine the brutal practice of witch burning in spite of a greedy witch-finder who will not pardon any of the town?s witches. A musical comedy

A brilliant young woman-of-science disguises herself as a (male) witch-finder’s assistant so she can undermine the brutal practice of witch burning in spite of a greedy witch-finder who will not pardon any of the town?s witches. A musical comedy
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    1. Singularity

      You should make it personal.
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      “When her sister goes on the run after accused of being a witch, a woman of science disguises herself as a preacher and joins the hunt led by a famous witch hunter to throw them off the track.”

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    2. Singularity

      Rather than “Woman of science”, just say “A female scientist”.

      And where and when is this set?

      >>>” who will not pardon any of the town?s witches”

      In other word’s, he’s merciless.

      The logline should frame the plot as a conflict between two people, ?the woman and the male witch-hunter rather than as a conflict between a woman and the practice of witch burning — and, oh, by the way, the prime instigator of the witch burning is a witch hunter. ?Establish a direct protagonist vs. antagonist relationship.

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