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Posted: 2018-04-07T10:26:56+10:00 In:

After an accident a young boy begins to hear his cat talking to him – telling him to kill.

After an accident a young boy begins to hear his cat talking to him – telling him to kill.
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    1. Singularity

      And then what?

      The logline sets up a situation for a plot but it needs to follow through with a concise statement of a complete plot.

      What does he do about the cat’s voice?? What becomes his objective goal, for better or worse?

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    2. Uberwriter

      Agreed with dpg

      Also he can easily overpower a cat!
      If the going gets tough, he can always throw it down the chute

      The premise of a talking tom is interesting though…

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