When his uncle and Stepfather want a new council building, the council lawyer to impress his Mafia uncle and take over his uncle?s mafia empire , introduces parking fines but he must deal with an irate customer and his computing hacking stepbrother who by interfering with his plans threatens to make him look incompetent.
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When his uncle and Stepfather want a new council building, the council lawyer to impress his Mafia uncle and take over his uncle?s mafia empire , introduces parking fines but he must deal with an irate customer and his computing hacking stepbrother who by interfering with his plans threatens to make him look incompetent.
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When a greedy lawyer introduces fines to impress his mafia uncle, he must fix what his step brother hacks-up to prove himself a worthy successor
It’s a start….
If you are sure about how “his regulating fines” works, I think you don’t need many changes. It reads good to me as an episode in comedy. Good luck
What are the stakes?
>>>introduces parking fines but he must deal
As the municipal council lawyer, he can only recommend.? The majority of the council has to approve.
And parking fines are small potatoes, pocket change? when compared to the money his uncle must be racking in by the regular rackets.? Even as a comedy, I fail to see how this is enough to impress his uncle,? tap him as his successor.
And isn’t it an “irate citizen”? rather than “irate customer”?
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