A group of Nazi solider’s try to cut off Russian forces by taking a shortcut through an abandoned mine, but something begins to hunt them through the dark tunnels.

Agreed with Mike, empathy could be a problem here...

Is there one soldier in particular this story is about? Best to focus the logline on one character instead of a group of characters.

As mikepedley 85 said. Who is the audience supposed to root for, to hope that they survive???

As mikepedley 85 said. Who is the audience supposed to root for, to hope that they survive???