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After a selfish, irresponsible, 18 year old’s father is framed and she is given his hyper- intelligent OCD son (11) to look after, she must fool Social Services into believing she is responsible enough to care for the boy, or outwit a crime syndicate into negotiating her father’s release before the boy is removed from her care.

February 16, 2018
After a 17 year old party-girl’s father is imprisoned, she must find the evidence to clear him before Social Services finds out and takes her 11 year old brother from her.

October 2, 2017
When a young party-girl’s father is framed and imprisoned, she must find the evidence to clear him and fool social services into believing she’s responsible enough to care for her little brother.

October 1, 2017
When a 17 year old’s father is imprisoned she must outwit cops and criminals to get him out, whilst fooling social services into believing she can raise a previously estranged 11 year old brother.

August 12, 2017
When an irresponsible party girl’s father is framed by the mob, leaving her with an estranged 11-year-old to raise, she must fool social services to keep the child and outwit the mob to get her father out of prison.

April 25, 2017
When a woman with incorruptible morals is targeted as an employee by gangsters her honesty and integrity are challenged when her beloved employees pull off the crime of the century.

March 18, 2016
When an intellectual couple with contempt for each other entertain an opportunist and his wife their narcissistic mind games turn more sinister and destructive than planned – Who’s Afraid of Virginia Woolf? 1966

March 13, 2016
When a young psychic girl becomes the victim of abuse she must use her ethereal powers to stop the horror and find a path to normality.

March 1, 2016
When a princess’s sister, the queen, flees after freezing their village with her icy powers, the princess must find her sister to heal the village and rekindle their relationship – Frozen.

March 1, 2016
When a vigilante finds true love then discovers he has cancer he is offered the chance to become a superhero to overcome the disease. The underground treatment leaves him grossly disfigured but powerful enough to hunt down the person who trapped and tortured him in the experiment – Deadpool.

February 29, 2016

on When a princess’s sister, the queen, flees after freezing their village with her icy powers, the princess must find her sister to heal the village and rekindle their relationship – Frozen.

Hey Saurin, Thanks for the note. In answer to your questions (I'll answer as past tense): 1. It was not the intention of the Queen to freeze the village. It's quite the opposite of the 'not doing what she wants…
on After a selfish, irresponsible, 18 year old’s father is framed and she is given his hyper- intelligent OCD son (11) to look after, she must fool Social Services into believing she is responsible enough to care for the boy, or outwit a crime syndicate into negotiating her father’s release before the boy is removed from her care.

After a selfish, irresponsible, 18 year old's father is framed for money laundering and she is given his hyper- intelligent OCD son (11) to look after, she must use limited resources to fool Social Services into believing she is responsible…
on After a 17 year old party-girl’s father is imprisoned, she must find the evidence to clear him before Social Services finds out and takes her 11 year old brother from her.

Great...Thanks! :D
on When a young party-girl’s father is framed and imprisoned, she must find the evidence to clear him and fool social services into believing she’s responsible enough to care for her little brother.

Age answer...She's 17. Absolutely AWESOME feedback. Thank you all for taking the time to?read it. One goal it is. Now I don't need to fit as many words?into my logline. It's a win, win! ?I love this service. Very grateful.…
on When a 17 year old’s father is imprisoned she must outwit cops and criminals to get him out, whilst fooling social services into believing she can raise a previously estranged 11 year old brother.

Thanks guys. I've changed it up. And it definitely has a strong comedic twist. But Nir, I know you hate the word 'dramedy'...Lol, so I'm too scared to use it. ?Anyway (tee hee) here is a different, but correct, spin.…
on When an irresponsible party girl’s father is framed by the mob, leaving her with an estranged 11-year-old to raise, she must fool social services to keep the child and outwit the mob to get her father out of prison.

Sorry, I meant to post that here! Thank you all, Great advice which I will work with!
on When an irresponsible party girl’s father is framed by the mob, leaving her with an estranged 11-year-old to raise, she must fool social services to keep the child and outwit the mob to get her father out of prison.

Thanks everybody, superb advice. I'll take it all on board!
on When a tsunami wipes out the island where a villainous pirate’s treasure is buried, he must turn to more conventional methods to fund his retirement.

This sounds like it could be quite funny (except for the tsunami of course). ?A villainous pirate having to work 'within the law' I assume. Sounds great to me. I'd like to see it.
on When a frontiersman, mauled by a bear, is left for dead by his own hunting party, he must survive the Arctic wilds and seek revenge for their killing of his son.

As far as I'm concerned you nailed that one. You paint a clear picture for me. Well done!

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