A grieving mother uses ancient magic to resurrect her recently deceased daughter despite her own mother’s dire warnings resulting in deadly consequences for those closest to her.
Categories: Horror
Categories: Horror
Although I concur that the wording may be extraneous for the logline, I'm guessing the grandmother's warnings are central to the plot.? IOW:? they foreshadow the? dramatic problem the?mother is creating by raising her daughter.
That's intuitively sound and comports with the mythology? paradigm:? every magical gift comes with a hefty price tag,?? with consequences that are?often ?foreseen -- and always unheeded.? (Because if they were heeded, there wouldn't be a story.)
Again, we need to know what the consequences?are of?raising her daughter.? That seems to be what the plot is about.
Although I concur that the wording may be extraneous for the logline, I'm guessing the grandmother's warnings are central to the plot.? IOW:? they foreshadow the? dramatic problem the?mother is creating by raising her daughter.
That's intuitively sound and comports with the mythology? paradigm:? every magical gift comes with a hefty price tag,?? with consequences that are?often ?foreseen -- and always unheeded.? (Because if they were heeded, there wouldn't be a story.)
Again, we need to know what the consequences?are of?raising her daughter.? That seems to be what the plot is about.
I join the previous comments. And you can skip the grandmother warnings, they are a very minor detail in the story.