A lover of all things meat and with selective eating disorder and a christian meets a girl who is a punk rock vegan and an atheist but a pretty punk rocker. She always pressures him to eat veggie burgers and she falls in love with his punk rock friend who everyone thinks is right for her.

Agreed with the above.

I had to read it a few times just to get my head around what happens and to whom.

Best to re think this concept with one main character and one goal.

Not only what Richiev said, but after expending all those words setting up the carnivore Christian, the logline seems to be about the vegan punk rocker falling in love with some one else.

????

At 56 words the logline is too long and complicated to figure out what the story is about.

Not only what Richiev said, but after expending all those words setting up the carnivore Christian, the logline seems to be about the vegan punk rocker falling in love with some one else.

????

At 56 words the logline is too long and complicated to figure out what the story is about.