A small town reporter tells a little white-lie to boost his ego and it snowballs out of controll. He must now make that lie a reality or be shamed out of town.

Agree with the other reviews. The first thing that caught my eye was little white lie.? If it were in quotation marks, it might give? it a larger significance, ?meaning it might actually be a larger lie and the?reader will wonder what it really is.?I like the concept and can immediately relate to the story. What if he told the lie to a specific person he thought he could trust and they can't hold a secret?? As word gets out about the big lie than the challenge becomes even greater and maybe even more fun.

Agree with savinh0 that "white lie" is not specific enough to give a logline reader a focused view as to where the story is going to go.? Which a logline should do.? It needs to be spelled out.? Ditto with the objective goal.

Agree with savinh0 that "white lie" is not specific enough to give a logline reader a focused view as to where the story is going to go.? Which a logline should do.? It needs to be spelled out.? Ditto with the objective goal.