A well-known psychiatrist in a small town encounters with the mental status of different patients wanting to become professional writers, but he realizes that his advice to them won’t work.

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Neer Shelter · Singularity · 39,985 pts

Agreed with Richiev and DPG.

The plot isn't clear, what specific event motivates him and what exactly is he motivated to do?

Former member · Singularity · 114,965 pts

>>>but he realizes that his advice to them won't work.

FADE OUT to the? CREDIT ROLL? -- Is that how the story ends?? Or is it the inciting incident for a plot to follow?

If the former, a logline should never give away how the story ends.? If the latter, then what becomes his objective goal as a result?

dogger · Singularity · 87,055 pts

>>>but he realizes that his advice to them won't work.

FADE OUT to the? CREDIT ROLL? -- Is that how the story ends?? Or is it the inciting incident for a plot to follow?

If the former, a logline should never give away how the story ends.? If the latter, then what becomes his objective goal as a result?