After he’s fired for accidentally killing a noble hero, and thus taking away honor from his evil warlord boss, a disgraced henchman is forced to become the champion of a local village in order to overthrow the tyranny of his former master.?

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jelewis8 · Penpusher · 125 pts

There's confusion in the premise, leading to unsure expectations for the audience. It seems like an evil warlord wouldn't care if his henchman kills a noble hero--that's why he's evil, right?

Then there's the passivity of the protagonist. He's forced to do something based on something else, rather than his own internal decision.

 

Former member · Legend · 114,968 pts

I like the premise that an accidental villain must become an intentional hero. But:

>>When the town discovers he is the one who killed their hero, they tell him.

Isn't that the inciting incident, the "Call to Heroic Action"? Isn't the accident a setup for the inciting incident?

dogger · Legend · 87,055 pts

I like the premise that an accidental villain must become an intentional hero. But:

>>When the town discovers he is the one who killed their hero, they tell him.

Isn't that the inciting incident, the "Call to Heroic Action"? Isn't the accident a setup for the inciting incident?