After refusing to do a job, a contract is put out on him where he must decide between his survival and the life of his target.

Somewhat. Yeah. The plot of it all is a little bit harder than I anticipated. But, dpg, you are pretty much on point. I hope you don't mind, but I going to reword it to kind of straighten it out a little bit.

When an assassin is ordered to kill his?significant other, he finds her dead and a contract is put on him without his knowledge. Now he must survive long enough to find out who put the contract out on him and stop it before it gets out to everyone.

I think I left something out, but I hope this explains the plot and makes the logline a little bit better understood. This is a script I'm really excited about because the art of it all is in the details that I can't put in the logline without giving away too much detail. This is something very close to me and I think people who enjoy it if I can ever get the logline where it needs to be.

>>>making him decide between his survival and the life of his target

Loglines are not about a decision a protagonist has to make.? Loglines are about the action that follows as a result of the decision he makes.

It seems to me that the story you might wish to tell is something like:? ?When a hit man refuses to kill an innocent man, a contract is put out on his own. Now he must save himself and the innocent man.?

?(He is going to rise to the occasion and save the innocent man, too, isn't he?? The man is innocent, isn't he -- that's why he refused?? Or is the target a woman?)

>>>making him decide between his survival and the life of his target

Loglines are not about a decision a protagonist has to make.? Loglines are about the action that follows as a result of the decision he makes.

It seems to me that the story you might wish to tell is something like:? ?When a hit man refuses to kill an innocent man, a contract is put out on his own. Now he must save himself and the innocent man.?

?(He is going to rise to the occasion and save the innocent man, too, isn't he?? The man is innocent, isn't he -- that's why he refused?? Or is the target a woman?)