“Claudia Vázquez is the most prestigious and reputed parapsychologist in Spain today, who from her early years until her maturity will not stop from facing the paranormal, until having a surprising and disconcerting final confrontation.”

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Unfortunately, the logline buries and obfuscates the lead, the inciting incident. "Until having a surprising and disconcerting final confrontation? belongs at the beginning, not the end.? And the "confronation" needs to be specifically defined.? And then how she must respond to it; IOW: what becomes her objective goal as a result.

At the others have said.

Unfortunately, the logline buries and obfuscates the lead, the inciting incident. "Until having a surprising and disconcerting final confrontation? belongs at the beginning, not the end.? And the "confronation" needs to be specifically defined.? And then how she must respond to it; IOW: what becomes her objective goal as a result.

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