FAKING THE BAND After concocting a scheme to achieve popularity and infamy a junior high rock band is forced to confront the fact they can’t play a single song when a spiteful teacher plans to expose their charade by awarding them a spot in the schools annual variety show.

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8 reviews

Foxtrot25 · Mentor · 8,420 pts

After concocting a scheme to achieve popularity, an inept rock band must fake their way through a high school variety show in order to disprove the intentions of a spiteful teacher.

Neer Shelter · Legend · 39,985 pts

What starts them off on their journey, in other words, what is the motivating event or inciting incident?

in addition, it isn't clear what they will do.? How will they achieve their goal, which is also unclear what specifically do they want?

Lastly, who is the protagonist?

A story needs to be defined by a framework of a finite number of events - start, middle, and end, a logline should to describe these clearly.

Richiev · Legend · 58,825 pts

It would help if the vindictive teacher was the father of the love interest and thus his vendetta is personal.