In order to fit in, a group of fresh-faced college students join a quirky, offbeat club about spreading positivity that regularly forces them out of their comfort zones.

Mac17:

I suggest "Desperate to fit in..." rather than "In order to fit in..." in order to establish the intensity of her need. ?And "driven but socially inept..." (or something similar) rather than just "driven..." because ?"driven" alone doesn't convey a sense of the character flaw that motivates her action to form the club -- and the flaw that threatens to frustrate her efforts at every turn.

I'm not sure how ?"spreading positivity" translates into specific scenes and incidents. ?Could you give me a few examples.

And is "forcing members into awkward social situations" a conscious intention, or an unintended consequence?

To address CraigDGriffiths review, ?it seems to me that the stakes are clear and legitimate and important to the characters. ?The misfits are desperate to find social acceptance by their peers.

Mac17:

I suggest "Desperate to fit in..." rather than "In order to fit in..." in order to establish the intensity of her need. ?And "driven but socially inept..." (or something similar) rather than just "driven..." because ?"driven" alone doesn't convey a sense of the character flaw that motivates her action to form the club -- and the flaw that threatens to frustrate her efforts at every turn.

I'm not sure how ?"spreading positivity" translates into specific scenes and incidents. ?Could you give me a few examples.

And is "forcing members into awkward social situations" a conscious intention, or an unintended consequence?

To address CraigDGriffiths review, ?it seems to me that the stakes are clear and legitimate and important to the characters. ?The misfits are desperate to find social acceptance by their peers.

What is the personal stakes? That's all I need. Once they fit in the story would be finished. Friends was about the going story of six friends growing closer and apart as they transition to adults.