Is this a valid log line? Or is it too vague?
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A transplant recipient takes on the characteristics of his doner. From beyond the grave this is his only opportunity to untainted his family name.
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Upon 2nd reading, I see that I misconceived the project.
My SOP is to read a logline? fast and furious.? For which I don't apologize.? Because that's the way movie makers will read it.? There's a 5-10 second window of opportunity to get their attention and for them to get the story line.? If they aren't interested, if they don't understand? they just move on.
I see now that the protagonist of the story is not the recipient but rather the deceased organ donor.? ? I suggest the logline needs to be tweaked to make it clearer.?
But my other questions still pertain.? Why must he clear a tainted past?? Since he's "dead", what does he stand to lose -- what more can he lose -- if he doesn't
>>>He must untainted his name because he didn't commit the crimes committed.
Okay.? And that should be clear in the logline.? The stakes are personal:? it's more than just the family name; his objective goal is exoneration, to prove his innocence.
>>>He must untainted his name because he didn't commit the crimes committed.
Okay.? And that should be clear in the logline.? The stakes are personal:? it's more than just the family name; his objective goal is exoneration, to prove his innocence.