Johnny Bando, a Japanese Elvis impersonator, collides with Randy North, a small town sheriff tasked with modernizing his office and his band of tripper happy deputies.

Although I like the names and get a sense of their personalities, I'd keep them out of the logline.? When I first read "modernizing his office" I thought of an interior design makeover.

I like the notion of a cultural collision.

However, as mikepedley85 said about proper names and a clear-cut protagonist, etc.

Further, I don't see a clear chain of cause and effect leading to a "High Noon" reckoning between the singer and sheriff.? I can see how they may collide culturally, but I fail to see how that devolves into a potentially lethal "law & order" fight.? What exactly does the singer do that provokes a "law & order" reaction from the sheriff?

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I like the notion of a cultural collision.

However, as mikepedley85 said about proper names and a clear-cut protagonist, etc.

Further, I don't see a clear chain of cause and effect leading to a "High Noon" reckoning between the singer and sheriff.? I can see how they may collide culturally, but I fail to see how that devolves into a potentially lethal "law & order" fight.? What exactly does the singer do that provokes a "law & order" reaction from the sheriff?

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