Series logline: A rich, successful plastic surgeon and reformed sex addict, suffering intimacy problems with a woman who offers him stability, returns to his former psychiatrist, a manipulative woman for whom he might still be madly in love with.

I like your reason why he was going back to therapy before - to be able to be intimate with woman he actually cares about. How about ?

?When a reformed sex addict can't be intimate with a girl he actually cares about, he seeks help from a sex psychiatrist. But her unorthodox methods involve increasingly kinky and dangerous games he may never escape.?

I didn't count the words, maybe too wordy, but something along those lines.

Combining the latest and the original. (and keep in mind it's a limited series)...

A reformed sex addict becomes entangled in kinky and increasingly dangerous power games with his manipulative psychiatrist.?

Okay cool. I'll have to use that one then. Yeah - the original logline for my pilot was ?A sex addict's sordid secret life spirals out of control?.

I kept it short.?

I kind of agree. I certainly wish I posted these loglines up here a year ago and made sure they were as strong as possible before writing the thing. (Though a potential downside is a lot of opinions can inhibit you before you even start writing and I like to explore and keeps things malleable). Maybe the key is to do a strong logline then write the script and change the logline as you go? I dunno. I guess we're all different.

Your 2 versions idea is good. Selling a script is an entirely different beast.