Thirty five year old toy designer John who hates kids gets a chance to design toys for one of the best toy manufacturing company under the super vision of four year old Sara.

The logline sets up an interesting situation for the adult character -- but fails to give to him a plot, There is no indication where the story is going to go with the setup.

Given the situation he finds himself in, what must ?he about it? ? Or else -- what are the stakes?

If he's the protagonist then he needs to have a proactive role in pursuit of an objective goal. ?What is that goal?

The logline sets up an interesting situation for the adult character -- but fails to give to him a plot, There is no indication where the story is going to go with the setup.

Given the situation he finds himself in, what must ?he about it? ? Or else -- what are the stakes?

If he's the protagonist then he needs to have a proactive role in pursuit of an objective goal. ?What is that goal?

Looks like a premise with immense potential! Keep em coming :)