Upside down in a binge, Hank Thomson loses a key that came with a cat that nobody wanted. Bad luck for Hank since that cat’s key belongs to a trio of badass Thugs, Mafioso, and dirty Detectives, bringing into focus all these sycophantic sociopath’s violent requirement for what Hank possesses.

by Seamoore · Logliner · 235 pts March 20, 2019 259 views

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dogger · Oracle · 88,020 pts March 21, 2019 ★ Accepted

So we know what the bad guys want? What does the good guy want?? What is his objective goal?? A plot is supposed to be driven by the objective goal of the protagonist --not the antagonist.

Also, check out the formula page for guidelines on how to build an industry acceptable logline in terms of the plot.

Robb Ross · Showrunner · 1,895 pts March 23, 2019

A half-hour TV series? What genre?

Former member · 114,968 pts March 21, 2019

So we know what the bad guys want? What does the good guy want?? What is his objective goal?? A plot is supposed to be driven by the objective goal of the protagonist --not the antagonist.

Also, check out the formula page for guidelines on how to build an industry acceptable logline in terms of the plot.

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After ICE arrests his undocumented girlfriend during a raid, a quick-witted loafer who joined only to skim money from the agency he despises must risk exposure to smuggle her from detention before she is deported.

When a flight attendant smuggles on a chainsaw and starts butchering passengers mid-flight, an aerophobe must bottle his panic to take down the killer and save his family on board.

After witnessing a deadly incident engineered by a powerful marshal, Raymond—an ex‑soldier—goes on the run to clear his name and expose the conspiracy, using his combat skills to fight back before the plot destabilizes the Expo-Event

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