Upside down in a binge, Hank Thomson loses a key that came with a cat that nobody wanted. Bad luck for Hank since that cat’s key belongs to a trio of badass Thugs, Mafioso, and dirty Detectives, bringing into focus all these sycophantic sociopath’s violent requirement for what Hank possesses.

by Seamoore · Penpusher · 235 pts 250 views

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dogger · Singularity · 87,055 pts ★ Accepted

So we know what the bad guys want? What does the good guy want?? What is his objective goal?? A plot is supposed to be driven by the objective goal of the protagonist --not the antagonist.

Also, check out the formula page for guidelines on how to build an industry acceptable logline in terms of the plot.

Former member · Singularity · 114,968 pts

So we know what the bad guys want? What does the good guy want?? What is his objective goal?? A plot is supposed to be driven by the objective goal of the protagonist --not the antagonist.

Also, check out the formula page for guidelines on how to build an industry acceptable logline in terms of the plot.