When a shortage of decent male actors threatens to shut down the high school senior musical, a reserved teenager is coerced into being the romantic lead of her rival but she has more than acting on her mind as she finds herself falling for her costar.

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Former member · Singularity · 114,968 pts

>>. Drama teacher sees lead actress arguing with another girl and sees the chemistry that she wants in her two leads. Two girls have a fairly antagonistic relationship since the one girl wrote a bad review about a play the actress was in in the school newspaper, hence the rivals. So the teacher and lead actress convince the other girl to take the part and the two girls fall in love.

Okay, thanks for the clarification.? So how is that supposed to work out practically?? One of them plays dressed and made up as a guy, right?

I suggest it might make for a? stronger character if the protagonist volunteers to play the guy role.? ?The incentive? is professional as well as personal;? it's a greater dramatic challenge, one that will look good on her acting resume. (Played Stanley Kowalski in 'A Streetcar Named Desire.' )

So the teacher is the one who has be persuaded.? The protagonist auditions and the teacher is persuaded. She gets the role.

Comedy and complications ensue.

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dogger · Singularity · 87,055 pts

>>. Drama teacher sees lead actress arguing with another girl and sees the chemistry that she wants in her two leads. Two girls have a fairly antagonistic relationship since the one girl wrote a bad review about a play the actress was in in the school newspaper, hence the rivals. So the teacher and lead actress convince the other girl to take the part and the two girls fall in love.

Okay, thanks for the clarification.? So how is that supposed to work out practically?? One of them plays dressed and made up as a guy, right?

I suggest it might make for a? stronger character if the protagonist volunteers to play the guy role.? ?The incentive? is professional as well as personal;? it's a greater dramatic challenge, one that will look good on her acting resume. (Played Stanley Kowalski in 'A Streetcar Named Desire.' )

So the teacher is the one who has be persuaded.? The protagonist auditions and the teacher is persuaded. She gets the role.

Comedy and complications ensue.

?

fww

Richiev · Singularity · 58,825 pts

Does the lead character have a goal? And if so, what is standing in the way of the goal? (I only ask because in the logline (As written) events are happening to the lead character instead of the lead character taking action, but that could simply be a logline issue)