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@dpg Yes. I'm hiding the ball again.
@Nir I know that by naming what he's suffering from will ground the premise. You have just confirmed that for me. Thanks!
I'm beginning to understand how this logline thing works now. Just beginning mind you.
I'm going to revise again, probably tomorrow. There's one more bit of info I'd like to add and run by you guys before I start writing.
Once again, you guys are saving my LIFE! I've been walking around like a zombie for almost 3 years now trying to get this damn story out there.
IS he suffering from PTSD? If so best to specify that in the logline, it will help ground the premise and make it, in my mind at least, more interesting.
Medication for what? ?What is his "mysterious condition" that requires such drastic remedies? ?The logline seems to be hiding the game ball.