Have an account? Sign In Now
Lost your password? Please enter your email address. You will receive a link and will create a new password via email.
Please briefly explain why you feel this question should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this answer should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this user should be reported.
When a young man meets his girlfriends family for the first time he slowly realises he is in dager and he must get out.
Hi nines, Sounds like a logline crafted after watching the movie "Get Out," which is even the same genre...
Hi nines,
Sounds like a logline crafted after watching the movie “Get Out,” which is even the same genre…
See lessWhen insecure Michelangelo flees to Florence after the pope asks him to paint the Sistine Chapel, he meets an unlikely mentor in a palm reader who prods him into battling his fears so he can become one of the world’s greatest artists.
Hi Odie. Wasn't even aware of any palm reader in his life. I meant to create some unlikely mentor to have him overcome his insecurities, but hadn't done any research at all. Thanks fo the feedback, I will take it into account and craft a new Logline! Thanks so much!
Hi Odie. Wasn’t even aware of any palm reader in his life. I meant to create some unlikely mentor to have him overcome his insecurities, but hadn’t done any research at all. Thanks fo the feedback, I will take it into account and craft a new Logline! Thanks so much!
See lessA cryptographer, losing touch with reality, discovers that his CIA handler is being exploited as a sex slave. To save her he must abandon his life's work.
Hi TOAST. The element of his handler being exploited as a sex slave sounds almost comedic to me, but I'm not sure it's intended like that. Maybe something like "held prisoner" would alleviate that. Also, the antagonist is elusive here. Clearly, it is whoever is doing the exploiting and the hero's psRead more
Hi TOAST.
The element of his handler being exploited as a sex slave sounds almost comedic to me, but I’m not sure it’s intended like that. Maybe something like “held prisoner” would alleviate that. Also, the antagonist is elusive here. Clearly, it is whoever is doing the exploiting and the hero’s psychosis, but maybe it would benefit the logline to clarify where the main opposition will come from and why the adversary is so formidable to overcome.
See less