1. Posted: August 27, 2021In:

    An ethics prof and family man must prove his rehabilitation to a court-appointed psychiatrist when found not guilty of rape by reason of insanity and committed to a mental asylum.

    beezeebee Penpusher

    Thanks, Odie! That slight change simplifies the logline a lot.

    Thanks, Odie! That slight change simplifies the logline a lot.

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  2. Posted: August 29, 2021In:

    When a languorous girl is warped through space-time reincarnating in the bodies of famous women after crying for the very first time, she needs to find a way out of limbo before she’ll be trapped forever.

    beezeebee Penpusher

    Hi Hank. Thanks for your response. I agree on the "mysterious man" needing some digging into, but it's great to see that you understand the basic concept and think it could be interesting. Great input!

    Hi Hank. Thanks for your response. I agree on the “mysterious man” needing some digging into, but it’s great to see that you understand the basic concept and think it could be interesting. Great input!

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  3. Posted: June 27, 2014In:

    A teenager's life is thrown into chaos when he falls in love with a girl and realises that he must face his past and himself in order to be with her.

    beezeebee Penpusher

    Hi Sam. The Logline sounds a bit vague to me. I would like to get a better idea is to who the protagonist is apart form just being a teenager and where the main conflict specifically comes from other than facing his past. Reads more like a movie tagline than a logline. From what logline it doesn't vRead more

    Hi Sam. The Logline sounds a bit vague to me. I would like to get a better idea is to who the protagonist is apart form just being a teenager and where the main conflict specifically comes from other than facing his past. Reads more like a movie tagline than a logline. From what logline it doesn’t very much sound like it’s something we haven’t seen dozens of times before, so an original twist on it could really go a long way here I think.

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