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Upside down in a binge, Hank Thomson loses a key that came with a cat that nobody wanted, putting his unborn child in danger; Bad luck for Hank since that cat?s key belongs to a trinity of badass’ that will kill the woman carrying his future. “So just remember, Hank!”
After losing the key which came with the cat...? If the key was that important the trinity of badass' shouldn't have lost the cat in the first place. Them blaming Hank (drop the name) is a childish causality. You tend to write antagonists inclined to harm the hero's family for his sins (like in yourRead more
After losing the key which came with the cat…? If the key was that important the trinity of badass’ shouldn’t have lost the cat in the first place. Them blaming Hank (drop the name) is a childish causality. You tend to write antagonists inclined to harm the hero’s family for his sins (like in your previous logline). I wonder if it’s the best way to create interesting adversaries.
See lessAfter pledging his eyes posthumous, a highschool nerd must evade fatal attacks from a blind cameraman (on a hunt for matching doner)
Suggested format:When a [protagonist] is attacked by a blind cameraman, she must cancel her eye donation pledge (or risk her life to a madman hunting for a match)How elastic is this Conflict, Can it sustain a feature length plot? How will the cameraman know that she cancelled her donation and thus sRead more
Suggested format:
When a [protagonist] is attacked by a blind cameraman, she must cancel her eye donation pledge (or risk her life to a madman hunting for a match)
How elastic is this Conflict, Can it sustain a feature length plot? How will the cameraman know that she cancelled her donation and thus stop attacking her? Why doesn’t she reach out to the Police?
See lessDuring the Oscars, knowing that it would be a highly televised award show with top actors and celebrities are kidnapped and held hostage by the Russian Mafia demanding the release of their crime boss who has been detained in the US. A stuntman in attendance and a famous actress whom he had dated previously must help in rescuing all the hostages including his mom who he brought to the award ceremony.
When Russian Mafia takes over an action film set, the hero's daring stunt double saves the day..Q. Why should he risk it? What's at stake??
When Russian Mafia takes over an action film set, the hero’s daring stunt double saves the day..
See lessQ. Why should he risk it? What’s at stake??