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Comedic Drama Tv series: When a Nigerian foreign exchange student moves in with a white suburban, American family, cultural differences and close minded town ideals turns the once home, into a house of unrelated individuals
The Action is still vague. What's the source of comedy? ..cultural differences and close minded town ideals.. can be replaced with tangible conflict. Currently It reads as-After moving into white suburbs, a Nigerian exchange student [Conflict] must [Goal]
The Action is still vague. What’s the source of comedy? ..cultural differences and close minded town ideals.. can be replaced with tangible conflict. Currently It reads as-
See lessAfter moving into white suburbs, a Nigerian exchange student [Conflict] must [Goal]
A group of students decide to throw one last party for their graduation aboard a luxury cruise liner, but the event slowly starts to turn into a nightmare when a stow away begins to wreak havoc on board, punishing the students for their past wrong doings.
inciting event can't be how 'a group of students decide to throw their graduation party'. Bring something which is visual and stirs up the existing state, like - when a stow away begins punishing the graduating students onboard for their past mistakes, [hero] must [goal]What's the nature of this punRead more
inciting event can’t be how ‘a group of students decide to throw their graduation party’. Bring something which is visual and stirs up the existing state, like – when a stow away begins punishing the graduating students onboard for their past mistakes, [hero] must [goal]
What’s the nature of this punishment? What’s the nature of their mistake? Seems unnatural leaving it unanswered; who’s perfect?
Good Luck?Tastybrownies 🙂
See lessJulia a high school girl, learns that her younger sister has a bowel syndrome disorder and should undergo surgery as soon as possible. She decides to go to Texas with her two friends. But in their road trip, they get involved in some adventures.
Since the Inciting Event is how she learns about her sister's condition, I'm assuming her Goal (which i shouldn't have to) is 'to help with her surgery' in some way... Instead she decides to go to Texas with her two friends. How does it relates to her Goal? That their road trip is adventurous needsRead more
Since the Inciting Event is how she learns about her sister’s condition, I’m assuming her Goal (which i shouldn’t have to) is ‘to help with her surgery’ in some way… Instead she decides to go to Texas with her two friends.
See lessHow does it relates to her Goal?
That their road trip is adventurous needs not be mentioned
Good Luck!!