Lost your password? Please enter your email address. You will receive a link and will create a new password via email.
Please briefly explain why you feel this question should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this answer should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this user should be reported.
A young man accepts the body switch offered from a cult member in order to start a run away from his pregnant girlfriend and start a new life. Little did he knows that the new body requires constant supplies of human hearts. Meanwhile, his old body replaced him at home as cult members have their own plans with his girlfriend.
learning that ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? he must his new body needs a? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?go ask to be returned fresh supply of blood? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?to his old self the cult members have their? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?save heRead more
learning that ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? he must
fresh supply of blood? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?to his old self
own plans with his girlfriend
the first set of inciting incident -> objective goal is what I suggest you go for in the logline-
After realizing that his new body requires an endless supply of fresh blood, a man must seek out the operators to reclaim his old body (25 Words)
The through line with his girlfriend becomes an added complication, to the fact that the cult members are not interested in the re-switch, which is all pretty good for the script,
See lessbut makes the logline harder to read- Returning to reclaim his old body, when a young man learns that his operators are trying to sacrifice his girlfriend, a commitment-phobic man must save her (27 Words) (not recommended)
When an ex-soldier comes to meet his son who was born of rape during the war, he must convince the mother (the woman he raped) that his intentions are clear. (SHORT FILM)
- when an ex soldier comes to meet his son..This is not the inciting incident, else the mother would've been the protagonist. Why made him want to meet his son? We need to know what's at stake, especially when the protagonist has been a rapist
– when an ex soldier comes to meet his son..
This is not the inciting incident, else the mother would’ve been the protagonist. Why made him want to meet his son? We need to know what’s at stake, especially when the protagonist has been a rapist
See lessWhen his gay cruise ship is invaded by terrorists, a veteran turned drag queen must use his skills to take down the thugs and save the day.
How's that a comedy?
How’s that a comedy?
See less