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A widower, coping with the suicide of her wife, must battle against a corrupt corporate superpower and control to her growing supernatural abilities to save her daughter who they claim does not exist.
It seems to me their claim could be the inciting incident for him. The suicide of his wife - however important for the script - doesn't help the logline & can be removed.When the corporate his daughter works for claims she doesn't exist, a single father must [objective goal]
It seems to me their claim could be the inciting incident for him. The suicide of his wife – however important for the script – doesn’t help the logline & can be removed.
When the corporate his daughter works for claims she doesn’t exist, a single father must [objective goal]
See lessAfter undergoing an experiment for which a victim?s memory is implanted to him, a serial killer sentenced to death has 24 hours before he suffers irreversible brain damage to find another serial killer and obtain his pardon.
You'll need to provide solid grounds to make us root for him, because otherwise, as a serial killer, he deserves what's coming to him
You’ll need to provide solid grounds to make us root for him, because otherwise, as a serial killer, he deserves what’s coming to him
See lessTitle: Curse Genre: Anthology Drama Series Logline: “In early 1800s America, an African slave is granted immortality and fights against the injustice facing the black community through the centuries as a vigilante. Pilot Logline: After a slave is revived from the dead, he struggles to free the other slaves and kill his manipulative plantation owner.
After achieving immortality - in context of fighting the injustice - what remains the conflict? What can possibly prevent him from freeing the other slaves?
After achieving immortality – in context of fighting the injustice – what remains the conflict? What can possibly prevent him from freeing the other slaves?
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