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  1. Posted: March 8, 2020In: Drama, Examples, Historical

    When King George III descends into madness, court physicians attempt to cure him with torturous remedies while his dissolute son conspires to usurp the throne.

    variable Uberwriter
    Added an answer on March 8, 2020 at 1:49 am

    Thank you for posting your method, It?s quite insightful. My only concern- I don?t know who the protagonist is.I like how this logline enables me to imagine the various forces driving the story; makes me want to know how it plays out.

    Thank you for posting your method, It?s quite insightful. My only concern- I don?t know who the protagonist is.
    I like how this logline enables me to imagine the various forces driving the story; makes me want to know how it plays out.

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  2. Posted: March 6, 2020In: Drama, Examples

    After a plane crash strands him on a remote island, a hard-driving Fedex executive, who never had time for a personal life, now has all the time in the world to merely survive.

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    Added an answer on March 7, 2020 at 7:41 pm

    I love how he never had time but now has all the time in the world to..Also, couldn't be more succinct with the inciting incident and his objective goal. Truly a great job with this!

    I love how he never had time but now has all the time in the world to..

    Also, couldn’t be more succinct with the inciting incident and his objective goal. Truly a great job with this!

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  3. Posted: March 2, 2020In: SciFi

    A mercenary teams up with a prince to rescue a princess who was kidnapped by her father who is an evil emperor.

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    Added an answer on March 3, 2020 at 4:05 pm

    - Two childhood friends, including a mercenary and a prince falls in love with each other in space until they decide to stop an evil emperor from having the town being invaded by aliensa mercenary and a prince.. who is your protagonist?'falling in love' should not be confused as the inciting incidenRead more

    – Two childhood friends, including a mercenary and a prince falls in love with each other in space until they decide to stop an evil emperor from having the town being invaded by aliens

    • a mercenary and a prince.. who is your protagonist?
    • ‘falling in love’ should not be confused as the inciting incident.
      It doesn’t bring the story into action. Think of a specific event which makes her go against the emperor
      OR think what’s at stake. She’s in outer space, what does she have to lose with this invasion?
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