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A public defender doubles as a private dominatrix to support her family, but when a lonely, corrupt judge finds out she must sexually and emotionally satisfy a man with the power to ruin her life.
remove 'lonely' and it might work better
remove ‘lonely’ and it might work better
See lessA total loser works for a ruthless Vegas casino boss to jinx gamblers. But after he falls in love with a cocktail waitress, gamblers become winners instead. Now he must save his Lady Luck from the boss’s murderous wrath.
I think your version is pretty good. One sentence makes it clunky; this is as far as I could get-When love debuffs his jinx, a hapless employee must save his lady from the ruthless casino boss
I think your version is pretty good. One sentence makes it clunky; this is as far as I could get-
See lessWhen love debuffs his jinx, a hapless employee must save his lady from the ruthless casino boss
A mercenary teams up with a prince to rescue a princess who was kidnapped by her father who is an evil emperor.
Since the objective goal belongs to the emperor's daughter,hence this should be written with her as the protagonistTo invade pertains to intrusive entrance; one must be unearthly, to invade earth.What's standing in her way seems missing. What prevents her from stopping her father?Is the action 'teamRead more
hence this should be written with her as the protagonist
for an emperor’s daughter or the rivalry between these families..? if not, these can be dropped out
Good luck
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