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During a notoriously bleak winter, a wanted frontiersman must protect the family he?s taken refuge with from an unscrupulous company that wants their land.
I like this. It's easy to identify with the protagonist, his fine mystery and his goal. Kurosawa's Mifune comes to mind. Good luck with your writing.
I like this. It’s easy to identify with the protagonist, his fine mystery and his goal. Kurosawa’s Mifune comes to mind. Good luck with your writing.
See lessIn 1961, a British double agent is blackmailed with his past crimes by a former colleague, and forced to spy on a suspected Nazi war criminal, now an American jet-setter living on the French Riviera.
Why did the colleague had to blackmail him, for spying on someone who could be a threat to all? Can the former colleague not take his suspicions to the Cops?
Why did the colleague had to blackmail him, for spying on someone who could be a threat to all? Can the former colleague not take his suspicions to the Cops?
See lessA former drug-dealer, fresh from prison, must help his best friend, an unstable war veteran, pay back a murderous mob boss, during the week of the N.Y. Blackout of ?77.
The action of pay back is coming up with that kind of money, right? How the blackout is stopping them from paying back the mob boss is?where your story is. You need to be more specific on this detail.Is being his best friend enough to make him 'must help him..' or else?? What are the stakes? the bosRead more
The action of pay back is coming up with that kind of money, right? How the blackout is stopping them from paying back the mob boss is?where your story is. You need to be more specific on this detail.
Is being his best friend enough to make him ‘must help him..’ or else?? What are the stakes? the boss won’t harm him when payment isn’t done. Therefore the urgency needs to be more personal (Otherwise, everyone gets what they deserve, including his best friend, & so what)
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